Holy smokes, you definitely have a nice way to keep everyone at the edge of their seats!
This was definitely an amazing and action-packed climax chapter that wrapped up so many intense and suspenseful battle situations! I also like and appreciate the fact that you gave everyone a role of importance to play in this. I definitely like the way you handled Cassandra, Jarena, and Violet and you did a great job with all the other characters as well, keeping true to their personalities and tendencies.
Also, never once did it seem like things were too easy for the good guys or someone found a way to cheat themselves out of a tight spot. Any accomplishment made had to come with a cost. Everyone had their struggles in one way or another and this proved that victory had to come with hard effort and sacrifice, and that this war was costly for both sides.
Without a doubt, we definitely need to get another RP out there and I’m hoping we can do that soon. Both of these RPs are great and the story you crafted in response to those and to add an AMAZING new amount of depth to the lore and background is awesome!
Great work as always, dude!
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