Popshakes' Poppin' Poetry Corner

[Suicune's Fire]

O: All your poems are really good, even the older ones. And hahaha, the emotional ones reminds me of when I went through a pretty emo stage and wrote depressing poems and diary entries. xD It's sort of funny to read over them now. I do like yours though, in all their dramatic-ness. XD

One error I felt I had to point out was the poem to Sean where it says "You makes me smile" when it should be "make" obviously. xD It's the second line on the third stanza.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your shiny poem. It is positively awesome and you deserved the winning spot in the writing contest, so well done. :D


~SF.

[Popshakes]

O: All your poems are really good, even the older ones. And hahaha, the emotional ones reminds me of when I went through a pretty emo stage and wrote depressing poems and diary entries. xD It's sort of funny to read over them now. I do like yours though, in all their dramatic-ness. XD

One error I felt I had to point out was the poem to Sean where it says "You makes me smile" when it should be "make" obviously. xD It's the second line on the third stanza.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your shiny poem. It is positively awesome and you deserved the winning spot in the writing contest, so well done. :D


~SF.

I need to fix those later. XD Thanks for pointing that out, Sir Fire. ;D

Also, I didn't know I won the Writing Contest until I read your post here. XD I can't believe I won. :'D My confidence is ever-so-high now!!!! :'D