Yeah, that's basically what it comes down to. More showing, less telling.
More flashbacks? I've been experimenting with those a bit, I'll have to use more and see what happens.
The former. It's definitely a symptom of having six different characters in six different locales, so each character has imperfect information as opposed to the reader, who is limited omniscient (as far as what's been revealed in the story). However, the characters have to learn these details by interacting with other characters.When you say, "some details that are already known", are they known to the reader? Or are the character and the audience learning these details at the same time?





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