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    Quote Originally Posted by Charmander009 View Post
    STICKY-FYING! 8D

    Sounds interesting! :) Do you have any idea what it could be that makes one of the persons "out of their leauge"? Are they just too popular, rich, fabulous? I actually think the idea of the person out of the league falling in love with the league one might be more interesting, because there could be a lot more you could explore there (and it's something out of the normal cliche, kind of).
    My first sticky! That is, if my memory hasn't died recently... :3

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    I think I'm going to make the boy the one that's out of the girl's league. It's easier to get more stuff in that way, without portraying their friends as psychos, and words that can be used to describe female dogs. Names are still very hard to think of, though... I want to call the girl Amy Rose, just to see how many people get the reference. :D

    I was thinking of going along the cliché lines as to why he's out of her league; he's popular, rich/spoiled, and not too bright (although I won't play on that last one very often). I thought that the girl could be very studious and only at school to learn, and not to make friends or have a social life. Then, she gets punished for something ridiculous by her teacher, and then she answers back, which makes him realise that she's not just a drab, study obsessed 'nerd' (for lack of a better word) who listens to anything and everything that teachers say without standing her ground. That's when he starts trying to befriend her, and it all develops from there.


    That's probably the very basic description of what might happen in the first chapter. Is it sounding okay so far?

    EDIT: I've had a HUGE brainstorm, and it was completely unintentional. Here is the latest on what I plan to add to the story:

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    The boy and the girl end up going out. Life gradually gets better for the girl, who is introduced to parties, and the joy that is binge drinking.

    Their love life is getting spread around the school by practically every gossip. They're both being constantly asked all sorts of ridiculous questions, and this stresses the pair out. There is then a massive argument between the two at a party, which results in them breaking up. The girl walks home, crying her eyes out, and then gets home, where the situation doesn't get better...

    As it turns out, her parents (who are going to be horrible, just a little heads-up) have left her, saying that she's a waste of time and space. Heartbroken and abandoned, there isn't long before social services end up taking her into foster care. The kids at the care home are pretty mean, and she ends up doing something that she shouldn't (drugs). Just as it is all about to go downhill, there is a beacon of hope for her.


    I realised that drama would be better than soppy romance, but I don't know what to do next. I want her to be taken off somewhere, but I have no clue as to where.
    Last edited by Blaquaza; 02-17-2014 at 05:00 PM.

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