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    Quote Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire View Post
    O:! More people need to post here so that we may come up with more cool ideas for people! I was gonna say "UM, YOUR STORY IS AWFUL AND YOU SHOULD GIVE UP ON IT IMMEDIATELY." XDD But nah. x) JOKE'S OVER, ME.

    Sounds like you have a good story structure which should provide entertainment for readers! Tell me, have you started writing it yet? To be honest, it's not my sort of story, but I'm sure other people will love it. :D

    I REALLY want to get back into writing, as I just haven't done it in yonkles. So I'm really wanting to discuss story ideas with people--not for me, but to help them. Maybe if others talk about their ideas, it'll inspire me to work on my stories too. xD

    ~SF.
    I started writing it ages ago, and the story has changed so much it's practically unrecognisable; the beginning is mostly the same, but with new characters to work with the new plot. She still goes into care, but this time, she's with one of her friends from school who is a bully victim. That night, the other girl dies. It's a huge investigation to see who did it, involving the care home's 'manager' (my fave character out of them all :3), the protagonist (who kind of takes a lot of my personality traits), the bully, another kid (Alvin 2.0), and an actual detective.

    Everyone is a suspect. I'll give you a random hint on who did it; a burger with metal in. And no, it's not the chef. Dun dun dun!

    In the end, I'm torn; I want the kids to either end up as detectives or spies, with the care home's manager being a 'scout' for whatever agency they end up getting signed to.

    And I'd love to see you write something, because you're awesome. :D

    WE NEED MORE PEOPLE TO POST HERE! Kidnap them from other threads, if necessary. XD

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