Story Ideas Lounge

[ninjaskarmory]

I have a story in mind.

Yveltal is in love with the beautiful Articuno, and he believes that she loves him back. However, when he discovers that she never felt the same and has found a mate, he is consumed by envy. He enters the training of a mysterious Honchkrow deemed "The Corruptor," where he learns many sneaky, evil tactics. One day, Yveltal goes too far, and Articuno enters a fit of rage. In order to make up for his deeds, Yveltal must get help from an old friend, sacrificing his life to return peace to his home.

[FedoraChar]

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I have a story in mind.

Yveltal is in love with the beautiful Articuno, and he believes that she loves him back. However, when he discovers that she never felt the same and has found a mate, he is consumed by envy. He enters the training of a mysterious Honchkrow deemed "The Corruptor," where he learns many sneaky, evil tactics. One day, Yveltal goes too far, and Articuno enters a fit of rage. In order to make up for his deeds, Yveltal must get help from an old friend, sacrificing his life to return peace to his home.

Mmm, this is a fairly interesting idea (I'm particularly intrigued because I have had a recent interest in Yveltal because of a story idea I have xD). But I'm wondering: what kind of personality are you giving Yveltal?

It seems a little strange that an ordinary Pokemon like Honchkrow would be training a legendary Pokemon--what if this 'krow played more of the role of the corrupting counselor, similair to say... Grima Wormtongue and Theodin (spelling fail xD) in Lord of the Rings? Someone who pretends to be his friend and listening ear, but all they are doing is feeding Yveltal's anger?

Or maybe you could have something like a Honchkrow possessed by Giratina or something xD IDK, throwing things out there xD