Quote Originally Posted by Charmander009 View Post
Hey, thanks for pointing those out! When I went back and read through it again, I also noticed another error I made--a repetition somewhere near the end. BUT THANKS. How did you get so good at spotting errors like that? xD

Anyway, glad you enjoyed! :D I imagine that poor Grumpy will be shanghaied into future tea party adventures, whether he likes it or not xD Oh, now there's an image: a Scolipede with a top hat. GOOD JOVE, THIS MUST HAPPEN.

I had lots of fun with Scylla's personality--very prideful and cocky, but gets a dose of humble pie with a pink apron xD But hey, thanks so much for the comments! :D
No worries! 8D Ahaha, I don't know. I'm hopeless at spotting my own errors, but I can see them in other people's stories plain as day. XD

I did! 8D YES LOOOOOOOOOOL. HAHAHA YES! That is an awesome image.

Bahaha, it seemed like fun. x) No worries! 8D It was a good read.


Quote Originally Posted by Death's Spook View Post
Actually, Suicune, given that "Pigtails" is being used as a proper name, not a plural, the most proper way to make it possessive is "Pigtails's."
Adding the extra "s" onto the end of possessive proper nouns already ending in "s" is a personal choice. I've seen it both ways. My personal choice is not to add the extra s, as that was the way I've been taught.

~SF.