Quote Originally Posted by C0L0R3D View Post
Requested Ping(s): @Suicune's Fire [S]forgive me if that doesn't work, I am NOT a master pinger at all
I SHALL HAIL YOU AS MASTER PINGER!!!!!!!

Also, normally when I read stories, I like to point out typos as a way to be helpful. :) But if you don't want me to do this and would prefer that I leave my reviews as comments on the story content only, just let me know and I'll stop. x)

"I totally getcha! Not having inspiration is the pits, but its worse when you get promised fame and acceptance only for it to be corrupted like it was.... you know?"
This "its" should have an apostrophe. :)

"That was like five years ago Tashy."

The two had shared a bit of an awkward silence which was occasionally broken by Gallen clearing his throat,
This made me lol. XDDD Great imagery.


OKAY SO I LOVED IT. The idea is simply ridiculous, in the best of ways. XD Gallen failing to gain inspiration by drawing Alishia but getting it back through a SALSATASTIC EXPLOSION was brilliant. I really like your writing style, and how you characterise each of the characters! They're all very entertaining and it was a fun read.

Also, the "Poko Incident" had me chuckling. XD SO GOOD. I can't wait to read more. Sorry I've been so slow but I'll catch up soon!