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[Bulbasaur]

So I arranged a song for solo bass, and uploaded the beginning to Youtube. Here it is:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SyxTVopEdcc
Many mistakes. Just wanted to show.

[XaiakuX]

Yeah rise was fantastic. I especially love that they gave Jen Ledger more of a lead in that album. Fire and Fury and Salvation are good examples of that. She has a fantastic voice.

That and she's hot. She also made the album art.

So I arranged a song for solo bass, and uploaded the beginning to Youtube. Here it is:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SyxTVopEdcc
Many mistakes. Just wanted to show.

I approve of you admitting you made mistakes. But, are you sure it's safe to post a video of it on YouTube? You've got a talent, but make sure your next video doesn't include those mistakes. From what I saw, you lost your place a few time? I can't really place a solid opinion on it because I don't exactly know what I'm listening for. It seems like you ended up becoming discouraged and quitting the solo. It's okay to get frustrated while you're playing, the best musicians make mistakes. A shining example is the first time Five Finger Death Punch performed "Lift Me Up." Ivan butchered his own lyrics. But he kept going. But it's not okay to give up. Tough it out, laugh it off, and keep playing. Future fans will see that and respect your resilience. Remember, this is just from my point of view. I say keep at it. If you botch a shot, just do it over. Take it from a guy who makes YouTube videos. I mess up scenes a lot, but I laugh it off, and I do it again.

[Bulbasaur]

That and she's hot. She also made the album art.



I approve of you admitting you made mistakes. But, are you sure it's safe to post a video of it on YouTube? You've got a talent, but make sure your next video doesn't include those mistakes. From what I saw, you lost your place a few time? I can't really place a solid opinion on it because I don't exactly know what I'm listening for. It seems like you ended up becoming discouraged and quitting the solo. It's okay to get frustrated while you're playing, the best musicians make mistakes. A shining example is the first time Five Finger Death Punch performed "Lift Me Up." Ivan butchered his own lyrics. But he kept going. But it's not okay to give up. Tough it out, laugh it off, and keep playing. Future fans will see that and respect your resilience. Remember, this is just from my point of view. I say keep at it. If you botch a shot, just do it over. Take it from a guy who makes YouTube videos. I mess up scenes a lot, but I laugh it off, and I do it again.

The video is unlisted. And I stopped there because I hadn't completely worked out the next part.

But thanks for the constructive criticism! When I do post the full version, it'll be as close to mistake-free as I can get. /perfectionist