LOL really? Well it didn't seem to bad to me! And wait, character limit? On what? The character limit for a post is, like, 60,000 characters, I'm certain. Maybe it's because you put it in spoilers, but I doubt that's the case too. xD I'm certain there's a massive character limit.

And nah, grammatical errors are fine. There were hardly any so you're good. xD And nah, I think I liked it without the lyrics. Lyrics in the middle sometimes detracts from the story, methinks. It could just be me though. xD

And no...I don't understand that at all. XD I can understand people not using full stops on the end of their sentences, but when people don't use capital letters, I just see it as messy/lazy. XD Not saying you are, since you seemed to have done it for a reason, but I don't spend time on sites like tumblr anyway so I'm more used to seeing good grammar. Lol. A lot of people on this forum seem to speak with near-perfect grammar naturally. XD lel. (I often type 'lel' with no capitals because it looks nice and symmetrical. XD) Well if there's a reason for it then I suppose it's fine, but yeah, wouldn't do it myself. XD

WELL. If this was late-night bad writing, WRITE SOMETHING REALLY COOL SO I CAN READ IT AND BE AMAZED! 8D


~SF.