Quote Originally Posted by bronislav84 View Post
Guns and blood and killing people is definitely not PG. This whole RP is above the PG marker. War is messy. It will happen.

Now how would you have me change it without completely destroying the character concept? She is in no way completely naked. It's close, sure, but nowhere are explicit parts actually showing. The character's choice of basic outfit and bust size is meant to be comic relief. You're taking it too seriously I think. I don't want to break the rules of course, so help me out without the character concept being destroyed please.

For the images is it just the first image that's much? That can poof if you're sure it has to go. The puberty description in the history is a major part of the character, though. Please explain how you want it edited so the character concept can be preserved.

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Without getting some help I can only guess, and I've removed mention of specific body parts and clarified that she is covered where it counts. Also put the entire post in spoilers, though yea, its not that explicit. What else would need to be done to make it acceptable? Sure I can't keep the first image? Besides that, is it fine now?

As I said I don't want to break rules, and didn't do this on purpose. Please, work with me here.
War and violence vs mildly sexual content are two different things. Violence and warring can be mentioned without blatant detailed representation of how a bullet passes through each part of a human skull. I can say someone was shot, and that can be the end of it. It doesn't form a detailed image in my head. War can be described without mentioning the thousands of wounds in a medical camp, or the other gruesome darkness's of it either. It's the what and how it's told, and you've got large chest boulders described in a lot of detail with the former already at the borderline of a big no-no.

You're describing explicit parts by including if she's wearing undergarments or not, as an example. That is not a necessary detail to include. I don't think I'm taking it too seriously, I'm usually very lenient and open on characters, but when people bring up concerns that include members and staff, it can't go ignored, and potential rule breaking needs to be taken seriously. It's my job as a mod to make sure I get things looked into and concerns handled the best I can.

The bust size meant to be comic relief, I fail so see a woman's chest size being comic relief without implying mature themes. However if you want to use it that way, don't emphasize on it so much and make it so out there that it makes other people uncomfortable. The puberty thing again, does not necessarily need to be put into that kind of detail. You can always mention it off hand in the story itself, or put it into other words. "She had back problems as a teenager due to bodily development" is a lot more of a safer way to describe things.

Remember that there are younger people who can happen to read the WAR thread and we could not even know it. You need to word things with a younger audience in mind.

First image: yes, that image has been deemed not appropriate by the staff, it's got to go. Also, again, if it's NSFW or considered as such, don't even think about posting it.

You want to have an emotionless acting female with large busts? That's fine [even if I do not see how it's a comic relief type thing], but in another set of words, you need to make it more kid friendly. Plain and simple. That's my suggestion. Again, other members of the RP itself as well as staff have brought up this concern. That's why I brought it up. Character concept and the required details for a sign up are two different things.