WAR Week 1: Post's 1-69

So interesting week so far... had a hard time deciding on things but that may be a result of me rereading the entire RP and taking notes on it. Please note that everything after Post 69 was not judged for this week because I had a lot of reading and notes to be taking. Yep I'm keeping notes. Don't judge me. I'll keep this short and brief, and I had no idea where else to post this other than here.

The Nonexistent Tazz: 3 points
I feel like what I've been reading from you is getting progressively better and better. What I thought was just grab n' cash turned out to be something a little more complex. The whole meteorite virus has gotten my interest and I see a lot of potential in it. Could go either way RP wise and I'm interested in seeing more of what comes of it. A ticking time bomb of impact for the story.

Lord Celebi: 2 points
I'm getting what I usually expect when you RP. [I hovered a lot back in the old WAR days] Also I've abbreviated Norb in my notes -that were written really late at night- as CAC, or the Crazy Alcoholic Caucasian Character. Seriously, that guy. Then you kind of threw that twist at the end so I'm waiting to see what goes on there. Surprise me.

Grassy_Aggron: 1 point
That thing with the Burst Heart experimentation? I liked that post a lot for what it was. You were trying to connect the dots and go in deeper, and I can see that whole premise being used in the future. You were exploring unexplored ground and I was very interested in reading it. [Even if the original was invalidated for reasons, the edited one was still good and yes I'm talking about the edited one] I got a sense of how much time it took to research that information without you posting multiple times, which was nice. I felt inside what was going on.


Other Mentions:

Spoiler:
Neo Emolga: I know what you can do, and I can't say that the boat stealing wasn't fun to read because it was... but the PokeTarts and the mentioning of the tanks felt like project posts in disguise. It just felt a bit flat to read, even while you were in character. About halfway through what you were doing, getting to the mutation parts were better put to me and felt more progressive and more like a story was going on.

Homura: Whatever it is you're planning on doing, I want to see more of it. I want to see what your crazy hacker is planning and we need someone to pull the trigger with some PvP stuff here on a grander scale. Get to it, I know you've got something really sneaky going on, whatever it is you're planning with DS.


Aaaaaand that's all folks.