I fail to see how this is a story. xD A poem, maybe, but even then it's completely plagiarised if the lyrics are practically the same as the song's translations. In truth, it's extremely creepy and stalkerish. XD

I'd love to have read something that was inspired by the song, rather than literally...the song. A story influenced by some of the lyrics, maybe, and the themes here. It would have been cool if it was an actual narrative with the structure of a story. Maybe something to keep in mind for next time. x) It's great to have an inspiration, but you're meant to draw from it and create something new, and of your own...not copy + paste.


~SF.