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    Mischievous Influence


    Laced with poison your words escape your lips
    Ever intoxicating and dangerous to hear
    They grab at me ears with a touch that chills my every bone
    Words of PROMISE
    Words of DESIRE
    Words of CONTROL
    Words of FEAR
    They suffocate me until I trust them completely

    Your smile lingers in my mind, mischievous and cruel
    Unrelenting and sinister, as my will becomes your toy
    As if I were a marionette, and you a skillful puppeteer
    Like butter I would melt entirely to your whim
    My God
    My King
    My Lord
    My Master
    For I am a man, and men to gods are like ants to boots

    For a man's will, mine stands stronger than most
    I fight to no avail against the might of your control
    I am an unwilling nor wanting servant to a child of Jötunheimr
    I am forced to carry your burdens, unable to change my fate
    O' Loki
    Laufey's Son
    Silver-Tongued Deity
    Trickster of the Gods
    Your words have manifested and stricken me like a disease

    Child of the violent Fárbauti, you may seize Midgard
    Humans are feeble towards your prowess of control
    You may crush humanity beneath your mighty boot
    Loki the terrible, Loki the great, Loki the prankster
    Father to Jörmungandr, the Midgard Serpent
    Father to Hel, Keeper of the Damned
    Father to Fenrir, Slayer of Odin
    Mother to Sleipnir, The Eight-Legged Stallion
    Your destined demise is yet carved into the stone

    My words are like poison as they escape my lips
    Yet the words that expel are not mine to speak
    My tongue is twisted and controlled by he who wills me
    The one I praise and fear
    The one you must praise and fear
    The one all will praise and fear
    Loki's will be done
    Our God and true ruler will remain eternal over Midgard

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    In truth, this definitely took a lot of revision. I originally based this off of Marvel's version of Loki. Due to people being able to relate to Tom Hiddleston's portrayal in a few of the verses. However, the Norse God Loki actually wasn't "evil." He was just cruel and seductive, so I chose him over the comic book villain. I actually wrote in Thor and Asgard many times, but Loki and Thor aren't even adoptive brothers in the old stories, so I opted to remove a lot. That's to explain to those who may not understand.

    Now to explain the poem itself. In the beginning I attempted to romanticize Loki's power over humans, and how easy it was for him to control them. Then when met with resistance, and warned of his demise, he takes over completely, and removes the man entirely. Loki, though playful in meaning, is very incapable of taking what he dishes out, which is why his punishments are so severe. I felt the need to make that present in this poem. I was going to make it longer, but I ended up getting a bit of a creative block, so I left it as is.

    A few footnotes to add in:

    Laufey, portrayed as king of the frost giants in the Thor movie, is actually incorrect. Laufey is actually a woman, and is the mother of Loki. (His father is actually Fárbauti, who still isn't a king of any sort.)

    "Does that say 'Mother' to Sleipnir?" Yes it does. In this instance, Google is your friend. Also, to justify Marvel's Laufey hiccup, Odin is the master of Sleipnir. Marvel did it right. Also, Fenrir does kill Odin, whilst also devouring his own kin in Sleipnir. Norse mythos is actually very dark and twisted. That should explain a little of the madness of Vikings.
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