Pokemon: But You'll Do (G)

[Kentucky Fried Torchic]

@Kentucky Fried Torchic Thank you for writing and sharing another amazing story! I really enjoyed reading about Winona and Steven's conversations, their sense of humor, as well as the vivid descriptions of their surroundings. However, I totally expected the story to end with Steven meeting the player character on Route 118 and the two of them visiting Southern Island (as they do in Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire), and I'm disappointed that this isn't the case... But that's okay, I guess this is Winona's story after all!

Thank you very much for another exceedingly kind review! I wanted to keep the player character shrouded in mystery to allow the reader to project his or her own ideas onto him. I initially tried to keep the language about him gender-neutral, but that came off as unnatural, so I opted for Brendan over May.