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    Chicken Soup
    I always wondered what of chicken soup
    made it so appealing to people?
    How could chicken broth -
    conjured out of water and grain,
    manufactured in sachets
    and frozen in time by silicon -
    make someone feel full?

    Could it be that it was made with
    hands tender and warm, that
    carefully poised the kettle's snout
    and pour their hearts into a little cup
    of someone's soul, waiting to be warmed?

    But what good is a sip
    when it only turns ice into snow;
    when there's abundant heat out there,
    to be hunted, caught, and made into soup.
    Idle blades weigh themselves
    with rust from lack of want,
    sleeping deep within their sheath,
    like a coffin in soil's underneath.

    Pages can feed you tales that enrich your soul,
    but like the ink on old parchment, memories fade.
    Breathe life into those words and feel your lungs move,
    you will see a life writ out of a novel,
    the greatest ever.
    By yours truly,
    the bold dreamer.

    Author's Note: As the name suggests, I wrote this poem as a commentary on the book series "Chicken Soup for the Soul". I'm not really a fan of self-help books but while I don't condone reading it, I think people shouldn't be over-reliant on such books. It's good that words can heal but reading is as good as not acting which is just not 100% helpful. Maybe 50? But that's it really.
    Last edited by Ganyu; 11-18-2014 at 09:10 AM.

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