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Nicely written. C: I haven't played many Zelda games but she doesn't have a unicorn to my knowledge. Was that a part you made up? <:
I liked the poem, although I would advise against the use of "perpetually" twice. Maybe "forever by her side" would work better. :] There wasn't really a flow to it, which I found a little jarring. Free verse is like that though, which I imagine this falls under, so with that in mind, I don't think there's any issue here. :] Poetry can be hard, so well done for starting! :D
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