@Suicune's Fire

Just a few typos~ I didn't see any issue with tense (but I'm sleepy so don't trust me).
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Other than that, your appeal was a leap of faith, with that evolution. It's a brave move (one that I wouldn't have thought of and probably wouldn't have the guts to do it) and let's hope the risk pays off. The use of the vacuum to capture the theme was definitely quite out-of-the-box IMHO (because I'm expecting some appeals to have biological growth or something along those lines).

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And woo, we do need some more representation in the Art categories. :]