[WAR] Season II: Creative Writing

[Neo Emolga]

Lol I keep noticing typos that I gotta fix so you might want to hold off while I fix mine. XD

EDIT: Man, I never realized how many comma errors I make at 1 am. Ok, hopefully I fixed everything.

Well, I started with yours while I was at the DMV, but I'll start from the beginning to be fair. Besides, I usually like to write up reviews while I read the story to make sure I capture everything.

[Noblejanobii]

Well, I started with yours while I was at the DMV, but I'll start from the beginning to be fair. Besides, I usually like to write up reviews while I read the story to make sure I capture everything.

Yeah I was afraid of that. Sorry, but it looks like you've only gotten two entries as of right now, so it won't be took much hassle I guess. This probably would have been bad if I had done this last week.