[WAR] Season II: Creative Writing

[VeloJello]

I'm guessing it would've been mentioned in the parameters if it was, but is it strictly necessary to use Pokemon in this prompt?

[Noblejanobii]

It does say that you don't have to use them but they can be included.
@Velocity

[VeloJello]

It does say that you don't have to use them but they can be included.
@Velocity

Um. I definitely missed that, yup! Thank you. :>

[LKWayvern]

I was worried that someone might get insulted by the opinions in my story... I was trying to use The Crucible as a reference for mine.
Anyways, I'm happy you liked it, Neo, even if I didn't get top 3! ^^
Also, superheroes. I've been working on an original team, they're not completely fleshed out yet, but this might help... If I find the time! *.*

[Suicune's Fire]

Sounds like a great theme! :D Congratulations to Elysia and FedoraChar. c: I'm pretty happy with my mark. x) I found so many grammatical errors when I proof-read it after the deadline... xD Oopsie.

I wanted to include the espeon and make him sort of ever-present rather than physically present, but I realise that I could have worked on that better. It wasn't meant to be a love story, really. It was supposed to be implied that she was under his psychic control, but didn't know it. It was rather ambiguous though, but it's part of the reason why I included that line in the beginning about "such ideas repulsed her." Lel. Also, the sort of "reason" behind why the espeon is manipulating her, well, his name is Yacat. That's short for Yacatecuhtli, which is the Aztec god of merchants. I know that this wasn't explained, nor is it general knowledge. xD So essentially he was a god, and he was making her steal for him to further his riches as the god of merchants. If I had planned my writing schedule better, I'd have explained that. xD


Anyway, the prompt looks cool! :D Honestly I'm still tempted to use pokemon in there but I'll see how I go. x) Thanks for your hard work judging, Neo!

[Elysia]

Golly, Neo, your words are so flattering o.O I've never heard of anyone comparing my work to word art haha. MY HEAD IS GOING TO BE TOO BIG TO FIT THROUGH DOORS ANYMORE LA LA LA TOO STRONK SUCH FLATTER MUCH WOW.
Seriously, though, I'm so glad you enjoyed ^^ The piece was a little experimental and I rarely get to spend so much time worldbuilding, so it was an absolute pleasure to write and I'm glad it turned out well.

On another note, this week's prompt also sounds super awesome. I have an idea that I've been kicking around for years that I'm just dying to get fully fleshed out. there will be blood lol flesh puns

[Suicune's Fire]

@Neo Emolga, question: do we have to use first person perspective throughout the entire story, or is it allowed to shift at all?

[Neo Emolga]

@Neo Emolga, question: do we have to use first person perspective throughout the entire story, or is it allowed to shift at all?

I'd like the first person perspective to be from beginning to end, please.

[Bulbasaur]

Sorry if I'm sounding dumb, but when are entries for week 2 due?

[Neo Emolga]

Sorry if I'm sounding dumb, but when are entries for week 2 due?

Saturday the 20th at 11:59 PM EST is the very last minute I can take them. So as long as you submit before then, you're gold.