Okay...
I changed the ending of Chapter 11 so it made a bit more sense. I think it's a lot better now.
I'm going to do some major thinking about how I want to residential area to be different, to, in Chapter 8. Like I said previously, I can't just pretend it never happened, now that it's out there. But I can probably still work with it, and improve it.
I'll probably take out most of it, and go in an entirely different direction with the residential area.

Now, some other news. Chapter 12 was the ending of Part 1. Yay?
I'm going to go back through the whole of part 1, and try to find some music to fit certain sections, like I've been doing with the last two chapters.