I added music to most of the fic. There were two chapters where it wasn't really necessary to add music, it really wouldn't enhance the story and I didn't know any place that music would go anyways.
I also stated previously that I have altered the ending of Chapter 10. In addition, I have COMPLETELY redone Chapter 8, except for the beginning.
I hope that Chapter 8's a lot better and more in keeping with the tone of the rest of the fic now.
I'll probably post Chapter 13 tomorrow.