This story just keeps getting better and better! I was very impressed with how you have been deftly weaving in multiple aspects of the Pokemon world into this story, particularly using Lysandre as a reflection of Ganon, and of course the myth-making with Yveltal and Lysandre's past actions have awoken the mystery-lover in me. Brock and Lysandre's relationship has also piqued my interest, leaving me hopeful for a literal more exposition on that, when the time is right of course! Finally, it was nice to see that Serena and Ash's families are okay with them undertaking this dangerous quest. Not only does it remove a fairly easy and cliche source of drama, but it also does a lot to illustrate how the world that they live in requires young people to also be able to possess the skills required to defend themselves.
All this to say, looking forward to reading more!

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