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    Elite Four Member Trainer17's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ghostwriter View Post
    10. Hate
    River of rancor bursts forth,
    dam broken.
    Vitriolic venom
    corrodes through the land,
    seething like a caustic cauldron
    that boils with blood and bile,
    fumes of malevolence spread
    their asphyxiating arms,
    like a plague of locusts,
    the vindictive storm raging,
    Death and destruction run rampant.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Lunar Latias View Post
    Either I'm counting wrong, or you went straight from seven to nine. xD POOR NUMBER EIGHT.

    Any time I see something PMD related I instantly tear up. ;n; That was pretty! Good job. <3
    OMG I left out a poem. D: Thanks for noticing; I may not even have realized...

    PMD is so emotional; it's a vast source of poetic inspiration.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ghostwriter View Post
    I can just see you doing this and it's amazing.

    I absolutely loved #9 and #10. The one about writing was relatable; I loved how you included all of those fonts! XD Brilliant. I especially liked this line: "Where saints are sinners and sinners are saved." Very nice.

    The one about hate was awesome. I can certainly relate to that one as well. It's such a complex emotion. Well, I suppose all emotions are complicated to a degree, but hate seems to have layers, breaking points, and such power. It's so easy to feel it sometimes, and other times, so difficult. Anyway, I loved how it was written. <: You're truly a master with words, my liege!

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