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The Queen of Shaymin

I like how you incorporated Ditto's pokedex entry into this. Very nice touch. Though I am a bit confused, what this just meant to be a diary style journal or a scientific journal? Because if it's a diary style then I'm a bit confused as to why the time was added unless this was a video or audio recording. And if this was a scientific journal, then not only is there the issue of the time stamp but also this isn't how scientific journals are written.
That aside, I like the style it's done in and I'm interested in seeing if this will continue or if your story has ended.
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