@Neo Emolga Hmm, small as it may be it's a long run-on sentence. That and "and how his absolute favorite was the one where he was Snorlax in a spaceship." Shouldn't it be "where he was a Snorlax?" Since there's more than one Snorlax in the world xD
Last edited by Chakramaster; 05-01-2018 at 10:40 AM.
The time is upon us...
. Pika Pair with the yellow bundle of fluff Chibi Altaria..
Eh, a bit of a stretch, but you're right. Though if you guys nail me for missing commas or instances where I should have used a semicolon, I'm screwed. XD
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Here's your fun little chance to get back at Neo and have HIM know what it's like to be transformed into some other Pokémon! The Peep that gets to choose is decided at random, but you can all help at contributing toward the insanity!
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I'll admit, like you, I wasn't too crazy about the redundancy of these two sentences when I proofread the whole thing, but I drew a blank on how to change it and just decided to let it float on by. But it does sound kinda dumb and only gets worse with age. Sure, let's bag it! XD
Happy Bonk the Bulbasaur Event #1: The Creator NeoEmolgaBulbasaur makes too many goofs and blunders!:
Here's your fun little chance to get back at Neo and have HIM know what it's like to be transformed into some other Pokémon! The Peep that gets to choose is decided at random, but you can all help at contributing toward the insanity!
2/3
FUUUU, I knew a comma was going to kill me sooner or later! It's so minor but... ERAGH, it still counts of course.
Hooo boy, here we go.
Happy Bonk the Bulbasaur Event #1: The Creator NeoEmolgaBulbasaur makes too many goofs and blunders!:
Here's your fun little chance to get back at Neo and have HIM know what it's like to be transformed into some other Pokémon! The Peep that gets to choose is decided at random, but you can all help at contributing toward the insanity!
3/3
The RNG spirits favor...
CHAKRAMASTER!
@Chakramaster
Oh yeah, I know EXACTLY HOW THIS IS GOING TO GO. XD
Figures, figures, I probably deserve this by now. Time for a karma burn! XD
The time is upon us...
. Pika Pair with the yellow bundle of fluff Chibi Altaria..
The time is upon us...
. Pika Pair with the yellow bundle of fluff Chibi Altaria..
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