Thanks Suicune, I am surprised there were so many mistakes, as I did proof read twice and corrected many of the 'thens'.
I also never even noticed that equal sign, not sure how I didn't catch that. My guess was I made a typo and meant to backspace to fix it and accidentally hit the = sign instead.
As for the speaking in the same line, this was actually written as a short story, I wasn't intending to post it here initially. I only did so at the advice of Max.
Anyway, despite the mistakes I hope you enjoyed the story and it made for some entertainment for you. :D
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