I love how you are so excited about the Sjřs. XD I was trying to eat lunch while reading that and I had to stop after laughing so hard that I nearly choked on a chip. And yeah, I wasn't as careful with grammar this time. Gonna go back and redo stuff in the future.
Also, Zhamós, that character that I intended to be bad but then turned out to be good, but also might still be bad. We're not sure what he is. If the symbols on his horns are anything to go by though, he's more of a morally gray.
Also I will point out there was going to be a Yorktown reference at one point, with Azrael's prototype character being named Hercules. And our resident Sjř was going to be a nod to Lafayette but I could never find a good way to integrate a Yorktown or the World Was Wide Enough into the story without it disrupting the flow of the story. With the Room Where it Happens at the beginning, it was light hearted and fits quite well with their characters anyway.














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