SQUAWKERS RPG CHALLENGE - Peep Payback!

[Ladybugclue]

Bloody hell, it's gotten all over you. You try to shake it off and it just gets all over you!

These two sentences. I'm very disappointed. Actually I'm not. I just want you to be turned into another Pokémon. Hopefully a Buizel.

[Neo Emolga]

@Neo Emolga Hmm, small as it may be it's a long run-on sentence. That and "and how his absolute favorite was the one where he was Snorlax in a spaceship." Shouldn't it be "where he was a Snorlax?" Since there's more than one Snorlax in the world xD

Eh, a bit of a stretch, but you're right. Though if you guys nail me for missing commas or instances where I should have used a semicolon, I'm screwed. XD

Happy Bonk the Bulbasaur Event #1: The Creator Neo Emolga Bulbasaur makes too many goofs and blunders!:
Here's your fun little chance to get back at Neo and have HIM know what it's like to be transformed into some other Pokémon! The Peep that gets to choose is decided at random, but you can all help at contributing toward the insanity!
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These two sentences. I'm very disappointed. Actually I'm not. I just want you to be turned into another Pokémon. Hopefully a Buizel.

I'll admit, like you, I wasn't too crazy about the redundancy of these two sentences when I proofread the whole thing, but I drew a blank on how to change it and just decided to let it float on by. But it does sound kinda dumb and only gets worse with age. Sure, let's bag it! XD

Happy Bonk the Bulbasaur Event #1: The Creator Neo Emolga Bulbasaur makes too many goofs and blunders!:
Here's your fun little chance to get back at Neo and have HIM know what it's like to be transformed into some other Pokémon! The Peep that gets to choose is decided at random, but you can all help at contributing toward the insanity!
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