GCEA Journal [Open]

[Suicune's Fire]

I haven’t talked to her much yet, but I can already tell the girl, named Palilia,

I mean technically she's named Palila but you know. XD

and it is quite the different place from the Kalos we call home.Lysandre is president in this world’s Kalos!

Should be a space after that full stop!

It’s a wild concept I know, but the true here.

I think that is meant to say, 'but the truth here'? Otherwise if you meant to say 'true' it seems like an unclear way to word it. Unless it's an expression. Whatever, I'm pointing it out anyway. xD

I hope I don’t have to visit this world’s Kalos or else I might assassinate him myself,

Not an error, just something I found amusing because I read it as "or else I might assassinate myself." XD But also, lol at Amy.

His history obsessed butt would probably greatly enjoy about hearing an alternate universe’s history.

Should be a hyphen between 'history' and 'obsessed.' I don't know why, but there just should be. XD



I reaallly I love that all these journal entries from Amy are addressed to Theresa. It's so cute! I think it's also a good motivator for her. I mean, it's one thing to just write down your thoughts, but another to be regaling everything to someone who you want to share news with. Even if it won't reach her. :c Which is sad. I hope somehow in our journey Amy will magically get the opportunity to send the letters...across time and space. xD Easy, just make friends with a dialga or palkia, or both!

My egg also hatched into a Cyndaquil, who I named Martini. These two allowed me to lie to Drake that I’m from Johto. I hope I remembered my geography correctly. Mahogany Town is in Johto right? I hope so otherwise my lie isn’t going to hold up very well. Still it’s a convenient excuse for now.

Interesting! I read this happening in that post of yours, but because I'm a derp and was skimming over it in an effort to catch up, I was like "hur durr I guess she was born in Johto and moved...but how did she get two starter pokemon if there was only one starter event? Maybe it's a partner pokemon even though Freya is her partner pokemon... Hmm...well I guess I'll just ignore it and accept it!" XDD But anyway, I find this really interesting! I don't know the specific reason why she's lying to him, or why she felt like she had to lie, but I'm guessing that it's so he doesn't find out they're from different Kaloses or something? It is a pretty weird concept to stomach, so it's easier to pretend and I don't know...maybe makes her seem less "suspicious" even though it's not like she's suspicious if she's from another timeline or dimension or universe because she arrived the same way everyone else did. Anyhow.

Her annoyance with Palila is entertaining as well. XD I'm going to enjoy watching their dynamic develop...or explode. Whichever one. Clashes are always fun. XD Not so fun for the group, but fun for me, especially to read about in journals.


I really liked this journal! :D Amy's thoughts are interesting to read and I think you covered events concisely but effectively. However because you made 3-4 mistakes which I think could have been rectified with closer proof-reading, I'm going to nick off one point. So:

14/15 total!

Also, you're awesome!