Alright let's do this!

Spoiler:
I do not know who will read this, though hopefully it will be my family when I get back home.
You need a comma after "hopefully".

Afterwards we made our way north
Need a comma here.

[quote]north to Oreburgh City,[quote]

Don't need a comma here

Hopefully I can get some decent training in tomorrow
Need a comma here


Overall not a bad entry @AWA1997 only a few comma mistakes! And commas are tricky little things so you won't be penalized all that harshly. Overall, while he's had little to say thus far, getting to see him collect his thoughts a bit does help us get some insight into Tony's personality. Hope to see more from him in the game and in the journals here!

14/15