Quote Originally Posted by brandon_g View Post
Thanks Suicune, I am surprised there we so many mistakes, as I did proof read twice and corrected many of the 'thens'.

I also never even noticed that equal sign, not sure how I didn't catch that. My guess was I made a typo and meant to backspace to fix it and accidentally hit the = sign instead.

As for the speaking in the same line, this was actually written as a short story, I wasn't intending to post it here initially. I only did so at the advice of Max.

Anyway, despite the mistakes I hope you enjoyed the story and it made for some entertainment for you. :D
Hey, that's okay! Do you know what? I always miss my own mistakes, even if they're super obvious. xD I can catch them in other people's work but not my own! I think it's because your brain flows so well reading your own work because you know what you mean, whereas reading someone else's work is entirely new to your brain so while you're trying to interpret it, it's easier to pick up on errors and such. That's my theory, anyway.

The equals sign just sneaked in uninvited. xD And yes, that's what I wondered too.

Oh that actually makes more sense! It seemed more like a short story than a journal entry, but I also liked it as a journal entry. And yes, I did enjoy it, even if Brandon is kinda scary! XD I hope you continue to write entries. ^-^