Sorry for the delay on these! Let's get these rolling hot off the presses!
2/2 for story!
12/13 for effort! It looks like you drew this with crayon but it actually really benefits the piece since it's supposed to be spraypainted and it all comes together super well. You've even included shading! My only complaint is you can still see the pen markings from the sketch but overall love this. I actually really liked this post in the story and thought it was really cool so I'm glad you drew the visual as well.
14/15
2/2 for story! New outfits and official refs are always relevant since it helps all of us players visualize the other characters a bit better!
12/13 for effort! For your first human in a few years, it came out really well! Neith's anatomy and everything looks great. You included some basic shading too which is nice. You're losing one point just because I think you could've added a little shading underneath the bag, and in some parts of the coat the background color seeps through so you've got like gray speckles where I doubt they should be. Also for the glasses, if you put white circles underneath the frame layer and then lower the opacity, it'll create a nice lens effect. But overall awesome piece! Love to have the official ref of Neith.
14/15
2/2 for story! Glad to see those eggs finally hatched!
13/13 for effort! You've got shading, everything is nice and clean cut, and the expressions are just so cute! You even included some little sparkles which is a nice touch.
15/15
I'm just going ahead and grading myself since Suicune's Fire is going to be MIA for a bit.
2/2 for story. Ref and what not. Same reasons as Neith.
11/13 for effort. Not a bad ref, includes some basic shading on the neck, the right arm, and on the pants. But since there's a lack of shading that is less than what Shruikan put forward, I'm going to take off an additional point.
13/15







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