Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast
Results 1 to 10 of 19

Hybrid View

Previous Post Previous Post   Next Post Next Post
  1. #1

    PXR Shiny Event: Writing Contest!

    PXR Shiny Event: Writing Contest
    ...

    ...

    Hello, and welcome to PXR's first Official Shiny Event! Get your shimmer on and prepare to dazzle us!

    This February, PXR is hosting a Shiny Event in which members will participate in contests specialising in different areas to compete for the ultimate prize: shiny pokémon. But that's not all. More prizes are on their way to the donation box!


    Rules:
    • All PXR rules apply
    • You must meet the deadline to qualify for a prize
    • Absolutely NO plagiarising or you will face unquestionable disqualification and an infraction. Not to mention eternal shame. Plagiarising is a serious offence that affects all parts of the forum. May also result in banning.


    Additional Guidelines:

    Theme: This writing contest's theme is, of course, shiny pokémon! You may choose to write your story about anything to do with shinies, such as a retelling of an encounter with a shiny you had, or perhaps the life of a shiny pokémon in the world. It's entirely up to you, as long as it is a piece of writing about one or more shiny pokémon.

    Medium: You can submit an entry in the following mediums:
    • Story
    • Poem (scroll down for restrictions)
    • Report/diary entry

    There are no restrictions on what form you write your piece in, just as long as it is your own. However, keep in mind that if you choose something like an diary entry or report, it will likely only win if it is both interesting, shows character, and does not sound like a boring essay. In other words, make the character behind it is interesting and keeps the judges entertained!

    Word Count: Minimum word count for stories and reports/diary entries 1,000 words. There is no maximum word limit, but it would be convenient for judging purposes if it did not exceed 5,000 words. Again though, you will not lose your chance to win if it is longer.

    For poetry, haikus and short-verse styles are not allowed, as longer poems are required in order for judging to be fair. This also ensures you put enough time and effort into your poem. Instead of a word count, poetry will be measured in lines. Therefore, the minimum amount of lines required for the challenge is 20. Like with the stories and reports/diary entries, there is no maximum limit, although judges would appreciate if it wasn't ridiculously long.

    Please submit your entry in spoiler tags, like so but remove the *:
    Code:
     [spoiler][*/spoiler]


    Prizes are still yet to be decided, and will be announced closer to when the contests end, or during. However, prizes will not be direct--you will earn points from participating and more point for placing first, second or third.

    Deadlines: the forum-wide Shiny Contest will begin on the 3rd of February at 12:00am, GMT-6, and ends on the 17th of February at 11:59pm, GMT-6.

    Check here for the starting time in correspondence with your timezone: Starting date and time

    Check here for the ending time in correspondence with your timezone: Ending date and time (+4 minutes)



    Thanks for participating, and remember to enjoy yourself! Judges look forward to reading your entries! :D
    Last edited by Suicune's Fire; 02-04-2014 at 04:35 AM.

  2. #2
    The event has begun ! Good Luck!





    Proud partner with @Pokemon Trainer Sarah

    Spoiler:

    Gible bite's Comic


    GCEA Trainer Links based on title characters

    ....GCEA Diamond/Platnium/ Blizard Blue/Platnium 2/ Pokemon Prism.......


  3. #3
    Senior Moderator EmeraldSky's Avatar
    Senior Moderator

    Join Date
    May 2013
    Location
    On my way to my next adventure!
    Posts
    3,305
    Would Pokemonized folktales involving a Shiny Pokemon count

  4. #4
    The Chaotix's Ace Attorney Blaquaza's Avatar
    Moderator

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Posts
    1,644
    Here's my entry:

    Spoiler:
    The Shiny Adventure

    Dear Diary,

    Oh, today was amazing! I can't believe my luck! I was searching around the Sprout Tower for a rare Pokémon, when I found a Shiny Gastly! I don't know how it happened, but who was I to complain? Here's the whole story, starting from a short time before I saw it to my first battle with it:

    Me and Rocky (my Combusken) were strolling around the boutiques of Violet City, thrilled after winning our Zephyr Badge. The rest of my team had fainted, so I went to the Pokémon Centre to heal them up. Whilst I was there, Nurse Joy told me a story about there being sightings of rare, mysterious Pokémon in the Sprout Tower recently. Intrigued, I knew I just had to catch one of them and show it to Professor Elm.

    When I arrived, shivers were sent down my spine; this place was just so creepy! There were vines all over the place, and Bellsprout were congregating in hidden alcoves. However, they all seemed perfectly normal – there wasn't one with an unusually small/large size, a weird body, or a different colouration. This was from what I could see, anyway... Trying to avoid the hordes of Bellsprout, me and Rocky silently crept towards the ladder that would take us to the next floor. To my surprise, none of them seemed to notice us.

    Now, this next floor was more lively! Rattata were sprinting around, happily gnawing at some of the vines that carried over to this floor through the tiniest gaps. Like the Bellsprout, they lurked in the shadows, so I couldn't identify any subtle physical features. Rocky was terrified of the rat-like Pokémon, so we quickly tiptoed towards the next ladder. Shockingly, we managed to get to this ladder without being confronted, too.

    After climbing up this ladder (which seemed longer than the other one), this floor was way creepier than the first two. The ghostly Pokémon, Gastly, seemed to own this floor. Scanning the area for any rare Pokémon, I noticed one thing; one of the Gastly had a blue gas surrounding it, as opposed to purple. Quickly, I ordered Rocky to use Flamethrower, followed by a Flash. He nodded, and then Gastly was hit by a fiery beam, and then blinded by a bright light.

    It was Gastly's turn to attack, now. It used Psychic, and then went with a Toxic. The first attack did a lot of damage to Rocky as he is a Fighting type, and the second one gave him a purplish hue. He then started coughing up some kind of gunk, but we weren't losing this battle.

    Hoping to catch Gastly quickly, I asked Rocky to use Will-O-Wisp, and he happily obliged. The Fire and Fighting type sent a twirling, flaming ray towards Gastly, which made it turn a reddish colour. It began moving, but it was much slower than before. Seizing this chance, I threw a Great Ball at it, and it opened up, trapping the monster in a beam of light. The ball closed, and then it began shaking wildly. The ball released the Gastly (who was surprisingly, still that shade of red), which made me stamp my foot in anger. The tower shook slightly, but that didn't bother me at all; I was way too focussed on catching that Gastly. Sadly, I didn't notice that Rocky was still trying to get rid of that toxic gunk infecting his mouth.

    Thank Arceus it was still moving as slow as it was, or I wouldn't have been able to quickly throw that second Great Ball. Like the first one, it surrounded Gastly in a white light, and then the ball closed. It shook less than it did the first time, before it eventually stopped and some small, star-shaped lights were released from the ball.

    Me and Rocky danced as we celebrated our new friend (who I decided to call Shadow). Rocky coughed even more, though, so I ran to take him to the Pokémon Centre. Nurse Joy told me that he'd been badly poisoned, and I felt terrible about it; I spent so much time trying to catch Shadow, that I didn't pay attention to how ill that Toxic attack had made Rocky. Nurse Joy said it would take at least six hours to heal... It took longer than that. At the beginning of the sixth hour, I was feeling really flustered and hot, so I went outside for some fresh air, and Shadow followed.

    Suddenly, some trainer introduced himself to us. I've forgot what his name was, but I think it was Barry. He was really impatient, but he challenged me to a battle, so I accepted. He sent out a Piplup, and I decided to let Shadow have her first battle. I was moving first, so I told Shadow to start off with a Toxic attack, and then follow it up with a Shadow Ball. Shadow nodded, and she chanted so that some toxic bubbles appeared. None of them hit, though, because Piplup was too fast. It counter attacked with Bubble Beam, which sent Shadow flying into the air. It fell to the floor, and then Piplup used Ice Beam. Luckily, Shadow never froze, but I told it to use Psychic to throw Piplup into the air, and then to Shadow Ball it to the floor. Psychic worked, but Piplup used Water Gun to slowly return to the floor, and it dodged Shadow Ball many times.

    I knew that my current strategy wasn't going to work now; Piplup was too fast, and it could move in the air with ease. I decided to use its secret weapon – a little attack that goes by the name of Thunderbolt. The charged beam of electricity came from the sky and delivered a massive electric shock to Piplup, who looked as if it'd been frazzled by the intensity of the attack. After trying to maintain its current, standing up pose for a couple of seconds, the Water type collapsed, and its eyes became swirly, just to signal that it had fainted. In my first battle with Shadow, we won!

    That kid (Barry?) thanked me for a great battle, and gave me some money as a kind gesture. It's nice to get money for battling, but that's not important... What is important is that after the battle, me and Shadow returned to the Pokémon Centre, and Rocky was no longer hooked to that poison draining machine, so the three of us were reunited at last.

    When we were about to leave the Pokémon Centre for the night, when Nurse Joy appeared behind us. She told me that Shadow was one of the rare Pokémon she was telling me about earlier today, and that I should be very proud to own one. Obviously, I told her I was more than proud of my new friend Gastly, as well as my good friend Inkay.

    Really, though, I just can't wait to hear what Professor Elm says about my Shiny Gastly! I'll hopefully be the star exchange student now! Take that Calem!
    Last edited by Blaquaza; 02-05-2014 at 05:09 PM.

  5. #5
    Yes, that's fine, Emerald. :)

    Thanks for submitting a story, Blaquaza! I forgot to advise, but stories in spoiler tags would be nice. :3

    SO EXCTIED!


    ~SF.

  6. #6
    Senior Moderator EmeraldSky's Avatar
    Senior Moderator

    Join Date
    May 2013
    Location
    On my way to my next adventure!
    Posts
    3,305
    Great! I have quite a few Shiny Ponyta tales I could submit

  7. #7
    Just one will do. :] Just make sure it's 1,000 words or longer. However, we'd prefer that you wrote one specifically for the events, rather than submitting things you've written prior to the event.

  8. #8
    Senior Moderator EmeraldSky's Avatar
    Senior Moderator

    Join Date
    May 2013
    Location
    On my way to my next adventure!
    Posts
    3,305
    Okay--I'll find one I can Pokemonize for this.

    Update: Here you go!

    Spoiler:
    Pewter's resident minstrel amazes, delights, and astounds with tales from all over the world!

    Gym Leader cum breeder by day, minstrel by night, Brock Harrison is already known across seven regions for his skill in Pokemon battle and Pokemon care. What you may not know is that he has gathered a massive collection of stories from around the world, and his passion for sharing these ancient tales shines as he holds sold out crowds in our own Fireside and elsewhere spellbound with tales of clever boys, Shiny Ponytas that speak, jewels with all manner of magic powers, brave heroes, beautiful princesses, terrifying monsters--including Darkrai, the Nightmare Pokemon, and more.

    Combining music, dancing, acting, props, costumes, puppets, and even some stage combat and archery, watching Brock perform is a must-do for anyone visiting Pewter City.

    In Brock's imagination, music really is magic, usually invoked by singing a mystical melody to a magical jewel. In addition to his voice, he also incorporates a whole orchestra's worth of instruments--acoustic guitar, tin whistle, harp, and even a grasswhistle all serve to set the scene and drive the story along--yet Brock is always careful to not lose the story in the whirlwind of song.

    Characters in fairy tales are often not named, but in Brock's world, every major character has a name, and that name is usually a hint as to their role in the tale. But Brock is not content to just stand on the stage and tell these timeless stories--he is constantly moving as he builds the story's world, and becoming a bit of a shapeshifter as he literally performs a thousand voices himself--one minute, he is the brave prince, the next minute, the king, and the next, the lovely princess the prince has to rescue, and the next, the monster--be this a Salamence, a Hydreigon, Darkrai himself, or something equally terrifying. All these voices and many more come from one throat--his own...


    Brock grins as he mentally prepares himself for his impending show. These people all came to hear tales of wonder--and I have plenty of them to tell today!

    After breathing deeply a few times to quell the Beautiflies in his stomach, he jogs out onto the stage and waves at the cheering crowd.

    Once the applause quiets, he begins "Once upon a time, there was a beautiful kingdom ruled by a kind and just king and queen. But one year, the king had to go to war and defend his realm from invaders."

    Piqued murmurs fill the room at the tale's beginning. "While the king was away on the battlefield, his wife, the queen, gave birth to twin sons. There was great rejoicing throughout the land and messengers were dispatched to the king with the joyous news." Brock continues. "Both boys were strong and healthy, and grew up like little trees. The one who was the older, but barely just, was the hardier of the two. Even as a toddling child he was always playing in the courtyard and struggling to climb on the back of a Shiny Ponyta that had been given to him because it was about his own age."

    "Aw"s fill the room as the audience pictures the heartwarming scene. "His brother, on the other hand, preferred to play inside on the soft carpets. He was always following his mother and never went outside, except when he followed the queen into the garden."

    He adds as in aside "This was why the younger prince became the mother's favorite."

    Nervous giggles fill the air--choosing a favorite child usually didn't end well for the family. "The boys were seven years old before their father the king returned from battle victorious." Brock goes on. "He looked at his sons with pride and joy and he asked the queen the billion credit question: which was the older and which was the younger?

    Whispers of debate begin wafting down the front rows, but Brock is quick to quiet the chatter. "The queen, thinking that the king was asking in order to know who was the heir to the throne, slipped in her favorite as the older. The king, of course, did not question his wife's word and so, from that day on, he always spoke of the younger one as his heir."

    The whispers turn angry as Brock continues "When the boys had come of age, the older one--we'll call him Brian--got tired of life at home and of hearing his brother always spoken of as the future king. He longed to go out into the world and seek his fortune and adventures of his own. One day, as he was pouring out his heart to the little shiny Ponyta that had been his companion from infancy, much to his amazement the Ponyta--whose name was Epona--spoke to him and said..."

    He switches to his best mimic of Misty for Epona. "Since you are not happy at home, let us go out into the world in search of fortune. But do not go without your father's permission. Take no one with you and mount no Ponyta but me. This will bring you good luck."

    As himself, he interjects "Prince Brian asked Epona how she could speak the words of humans."

    "Don't ask me," he replies as Epona, "for I can't tell you. But I want to be your friend and counselor and I will be as long as you do as I tell you."

    As himself, he goes on "Prince Brian promised to do everything Epona told him to do. So he went to his father to ask permission to go out into the world. At first, his father was unwilling to let him go, but his mother gave her permission. After a little bit of pleading and coaxing..." Giggles go up at Brock's understatement. "he finally won his father's consent. Of course, the king wanted Prince Brian to go forth in a manner befitting his rank with a great company of men and Ponytas. But Prince Brian insisted that he wished to go alone.

    In a mimic of Ash for Prince Brian, he rants "Why, my dear father, do I need any such retinue as you suggest? Let me have some money for the journey and let me ride off alone on my own little Ponyta. This will give me more freedom and less trouble."

    Laughter goes up at this. "Again he had to argue with his father for some time, but at last he succeeded in arranging everything to his liking." Brock assures his audience as he retrieves his trademark guitar. "Before long, the day of parting came. Epona stood saddled at the castle gate. Prince Brian bade farewell to his parents and his brother. They all said tearful goodbyes, but at the last moment the queen had a change of heart, and told Prince Brian the truth. She made him solemnly promise that he would return home within a year, or at least send them word of his whereabouts at that time."

    Excited whispers go up as the audience speculates what adventures Prince Brian and Epona will get into. "So Prince Brian mounted Epona, and off they went." Brock continues over a droning melody that sounds like galloping. "Epona went at a surprising pace for a Pokemon that was seventeen years old, but to be fair, she was no ordinary Ponyta. The years had not touched her at all. Her coat was as smooth as satin and shone as white as the moon. Her mane glowed blue instead of red like other Ponytas. No matter how far she traveled, she never tired."

    Awed gasps and whispers fill the air at Epona's description as the droning melody transforms into the jig "Light At the Close of Day". to mimic the passage of time, prompting some in the audience to clap along. "Epona carried Prince Brian a great distance until they spotted the towers of a beautiful city." Brock continues when the last chord dies. "Then Epona left the beaten path and crossed a field to a huge rock. When they reached the rock, Epona laid a hoof on it and sang...."

    As Epona, he sings Jao wiisha nes chiel com yutuul...

    Wild cheers fill the air at the familiar spellsong. "...and the rock opened. They rode inside and Prince Brian found himself in a comfortable stable." Brock continues as himself.

    As Epona, he instructs "Now you will leave me here, and go on alone to the nearby town. You must pretend you are a poor boy, and be careful never to reveal who you really are. Present yourself at court and have the king take you into his service. When you need anything, no matter what it is, come to the rock, sing the song 'Jao wiisha nes chiel com yutuul', and the rock will open to you."

    As himself, he continues "Prince Brian thought to himself: 'Epona certainly knows what she's talking about, so of course I'll do as she says.' So he disguised himself by dressing in ragged clothes, putting a patch over one eye, and making his face look pale and sallow. Then he presented himself at court and told the most heartwrenching tale of woe he could think of. The king felt sorry for Prince Brian, and took him into his service."

    He starts a playful melody as he continues "Prince Brian was capable and quick at everything he was told to do, and it wasn't long before the king put him in charge of the household. His advice was asked in all matters of importance and all day long he hurried about the castle going from one thing to another. If the king needed a scribe, there wasn't a cleverer one anywhere than Prince Brian. Before long, he was well loved and well liked by the entire court."

    The guitar's song begins slowing down into a love theme. "Now, the king had three daughters, each more beautiful than the other." Brock explains as he plays. "The oldest was named Orla, the second, Ariana, and the youngest, Christina."

    Applause goes up in approval of the princess' names. "Prince Brian loved to be with the three princesses and as he was presumed to be a poor boy, the king made no objection to his spending time with them." Brock continues, still playing his love song. "How could the king possibly think that there was any danger of a poor boy stealing the heart of one of the princesses? They liked him, all three of them, and were always taking him with them wherever they went. He wove garlands for them, spun golden thread, picked them flowers, and drew them designs of birds and flowers for their embroidery. He liked them all, but he liked Princess Christina best. Everything he did for her was done a little better than for the others. The garlands he wove her were richer, the designs he drew for her were more beautiful. The two older sisters noticed this and laughed, and when they were alone they teased Princess Christina. Princess Christina, who had a sweet and amiable disposition, knew the teasing was all in good fun, and happily played along."

    The love song then begins to turn into a somber lament. "Prince Brian had been at the court for some time when one morning he found the king sitting sad and gloomy over his breakfast. So he asked him what was the matter." Brock narrates.

    "Is it possible, my dear boy," he sighs in a gentle, deeper version of himself--his favorite "king" voice to perform-- "that you don't know what's the matter? Don't you know the calamity that threatens us? Don't you know the bitter three days that are at hand for me?"

    He interjects as himself "Prince Brian, alarmed by the seriousness of the king's manner, shook his head no."

    "Then I'll tell you," he replies as the king over the lament he is playing, "although you can be of no help. Years ago three Hydreigons came flying through this land and landed on a great rock near here. They laid waste to the country, devouring the Tauros and killing men,women,children, and Pokemon alike. Soon the city was in a state of siege. To keep them away we placed all the food we had outside the gates and in a short time we ourselves were starving. In desperation I had an old wise woman called to court and asked her was there any way to drive these monsters from the land. the only way to drive them off was to promise the awful creatures my three beautiful daughters when they came of age. At that time my daughters were only small children and I thought to myself many things might happen in the years before they grew up. So, to relieve my stricken land, I promised the Hydreigons my daughters. The poor queen died of a broken heart, but my daughters grew up knowing nothing of their fate. As soon as I made the monstrous bargain, the Hydreigons flew away and until yesterday were never seen again. Last night, a shepherd, beside himself with terror, brought me the news that the Hydreigons are again settled in their old rock and are sending out fearful roars. Tomorrow I must sacrifice to them my oldest child Princess Orla, the day after tomorrow my second child, Princess Ariana, and the day after that my youngest, Princess Christina."

    Gasps and "oh no"s race through the crowd as the guitar's last foreboding chord fades away. "Prince Brian was horrified at what he heard, and hurried to the princesses' room." Brock continues as himself. "He found them dressed all in black and looking white as a Gastly. They were sitting in a row and bemoaning their terrible fate. Prince Brian tried to comfort them, telling them that surely a great hero would appear to rescue them. But they paid no mind to him and kept on moaning and crying. Grief and confusion spread throughout the city, for everyone loved the royal family. Every house as well as the palace was soon draped in black and the sound of mourning was heard on every side."

    After a few tense seconds, Brock goes on "One night, Prince Brian hurried secretly out of the city and across the field to the rock where Epona was stabled. He laid his hands on the rock and sang..."

    As Prince Brian, he sings Jao wiisha nes chiel com yutuul...

    "the rock opened, and he entered." he continues as himself. "He stroked Epona's glowing blue mane and kissed her muzzle in greeting."

    "My dear Epona," he explains as Prince Brian, "I have come to you for advice. Help me and I will be happy forever."

    He interjects as himself "and he told Epona the story of the Hydreigons."

    "Oh, I know all about those Hydreigons," he replies as Epona. "In fact, it was that you might rescue the princesses that I brought you here in the first place. Early tomorrow morning come back and I will tell you what to do."

    Excited whispers fill the air in anticipation of a battle. "Prince Brian returned to the castle with such joy shining in his face that if anyone had noticed him, he would have gotten yelled at." Brock continues as himself over a hopeful melody. "He spent the day with the princesses trying to comfort and console them, but in spite of all he could do they felt only more terrified as the hours went by."

    As the last chord of his hopeful song dies, he continues "The next day, at the first streak of dawn, he was at the rock. Epona greeted him and said...

    As Epona, he instructs "Lift up the stone under my trough and take what you find there."

    He continues as himself "Prince Brian did as he was told. He lifted the stone and under the stone he found a large chest. Inside the chest he found three beautiful suits of clothing, with caps and plumes to match, a sword and a bridle. The first suit was red embroidered in silver and studded with diamonds, the second was deep blue and embroidered in gold, and the third was green,and richly embroidered with silver and studded with diamonds and pearls. For all three suits there was but one mighty sword. Its blade was beautifully inlaid and its scabbard shone with precious stones. The bridle was also richly jeweled."

    "Wow"s and awed whistles fill the room as the audience pictures the magical items. "All three suits are for you," Brock explains as Epona. "For the first day, put on the red one."

    As himself, he quickly narrates "So Prince Brian dressed himself in the red suit, buckled on his sword, and threw the bridle over Epona's head."

    "Have no fear," he assures the audience as Epona. "Cut bravely into the monster, trusting to your sword. And remember, do not dismount."

    As himself, he continues over a tense theme "At the castle heartbroken farewells were being said. Princess Orla parted from her father and her sisters, stepped into a carriage, and accompanied by a great multitude of her weeping subjects was slowly driven out of town to Dragon's Rock. As they neared the meeting spot Princess Orla stepped into the grass. She took a few steps forward, then collapsed on the ground." Nervous giggles go up up as he plays a downward glissando on one string to mimic Princess Orla fainting.

    The tense melody gives way into the Zelda theme. "At that moment the people saw galloping toward them a knight with a red and white plume. In a voice of authority he ordered them to stand back and leave him to deal with the Hydreigon. They were glad enough to lead Princess Orla away and went to a hill, where they could watch the impending battle at a safe distance." Brock continues as he plays. "Then there was a deep rumbling noise, the earth shook, and Dragon's Rock opened. A huge Hydreigon crawled out, and it spat fire and poison from all three mouths and turned all three of its heads this way and that, looking for its promised prey. When he saw the knight he let out a horrible roar.

    The audience begins clapping along with the iconic video game theme, as if cheering Prince Brian on as Brock gives the play by play. "Prince Brian rode straight at him and with one blow of his sword cut off one of the Hydreigon's heads. The Hydreigon writhed and enveloped Prince Brian in flames and poisonous fumes. But Prince Brian, undaunted, struck at him again and again until he had cut off all three heads. The life that still remained in the loathsome body, Epona finished with her hooves."

    Cheers go up as Brock plays the "got item" stinger to signal a victory. "When the Hydreigon had perished, Prince Brian turned and galloped back the way he had come. Princess Orla looked after him, wishing she could follow him to thank him for rescuing her. But she remembered her father back at the castle and felt it was her duty to come back to him as quickly as she could."

    He grins at the enthralled audience. "I can't even begin to describe the king's joy when Princess Orla appeared before him safe and sound. Her sisters embraced her and wondered if a hero would rescue them as well. Prince Brian assured them that he was certain they, too, would be saved. Although the prospect of the next morning still terrified them, hope had come to them, and Prince Brian even succeeded in making them laugh a few times."

    "Aw"s go up as the audience pictures Prince Brian making the princesses laugh. "The next day, Princess Ariana was led out." Brock snaps the audience back to reality with an expectant Bb chord. As he plays a slightly lower key version of the Zelda theme, he adds "Just like the day before, the unknown knight appeared, this time wearing a royal blue costume. He attacked the second Hydreigon and, after a long and valiant battle, dispatched it. Then before anyone could reach him, he turned and rode away.

    He interjects as he stops the song "Princess Ariana returned to the castle, saddened that she had not been able to speak to the knight and express her gratitude. Princess Christina then said..."

    In his best mimic of Dawn, he scolds "You, my sisters, were silly not to speak to him before he rode away. Tomorrow if he rescues me, I will kneel before him; and not get up until he consents to return with me to the castle."

    As himself, he continues "Prince Brian burst out laughing at this and Princess Christina asked him what was so funny. He explained that he, too, wanted to see the hero."

    A foreboding riff quiets the "Aw"s. "On the third day, Princess Christina was taken out to Dragon's Rock, and this time, the king came too." Brock intones "Princess Christina's heart raced when she thought that if the unknown hero failed to appear she would be handed over to the horrible monster."

    Cheers go up as the guitar begins the familiar Zelda theme again. "A joyous shout from the people told her that the hero was coming." Brock narrates over the song. "Then she saw him, a gallant figure in green with a white plume floating in the wind. As he had killed the first Hydreigon, and the second Hydreigon, so he killed the third; although the struggle was longer and Epona had her hooves full trying to stand up against the poisonous fumes.

    The crowd enthusiastically claps along with the iconic video game song before it comes to a screeching halt four repetitions later. "After a very long and drawn out battle, the Hydreigon was slain." Brock smiles, playing the "got item" stinger to thunderous cheers. "Princess Christina and the king rushed up to the hero and begged him to return with them to the castle. He hardly knew how to refuse, especially when Princess Christina, kneeling before him, grasped the edge of his tunic and looked up at him with such sad Growlithe eyes that his heart melted and he was ready to do anything she asked."

    He then interjects "But Epona took matters into her own hooves, reared up suddenly, and galloped off before the hero had time to dismount."

    Laughter goes up at this. "So Princess Christina, too, was unable to bring the hero back to the castle." Brock goes on. "The king and all the court were understandably disappointed, but their disappointment was swallowed up in their joy that the princesses had been so miraculously saved. But a few days later, with Epona's permission, Prince Brian revealed himself to Princess Christina, told her everything, and explained why he had to hide his identity from her. This only made Princess Christina's love for him even stronger, and it wasn't long before the two of them were married."

    He concludes "Prince Brian and Epona went on many more adventures together, but that is another story for another day!" He adds a playful flourish on the guitar to prove his point.

    The crowd roars as Brock sets the guitar aside and takes a sweeping bow...


    Total word count: 3878
    Actual tale used here
    Last edited by EmeraldSky; 02-09-2014 at 03:21 AM.

  9. #9
    The Chaotix's Ace Attorney Blaquaza's Avatar
    Moderator

    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Posts
    1,644
    Wow, I've got no chance against that. You're story was great, Emerald!

    By the way, because the story needed to be related to GCeA if I wanted to win the Shiny Charm, I removed all references to Squidward and Shadow being asleep, with Rocky (Serena's Combusken), and Shadow being burned.

  10. #10
    Senior Moderator EmeraldSky's Avatar
    Senior Moderator

    Join Date
    May 2013
    Location
    On my way to my next adventure!
    Posts
    3,305
    Thanks--I had fun writing out Brock's performance

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •