The Eon Academy [S.S. Wishmaker Side-Story]

[[Desolate Divine]]

Man these were all incredible dude!

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each character was handled very nicely and it built up a strong story and was very engaging to read. It was very nicely paced too. Everyone else's characters had something to do and it fit so well too. The ending to the fights were intense and rewarding. Even in the epilogue. I really enjoyed how the Diamond Ladies made that broadcast and basically showed they were done hiding.

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Cheers for the kind words. Really glad you enjoyed it! And cheers for filling me in on your idea for Jirachi closing the Netherlink at the cost of falling asleep. Honestly, it tied in to Rayquaza Mega Evolving really well. One of the themes that got pushed a bit, particularly after the ill fated tactics meeting was that teamwork isn't as clear cut as we agree on everything and do everything together and the way that Jon and Jimmy, despite being very different and clashing the evening before, still fought with their own strengths on the same battlefield (relatively speaking), without necessarily being nearby one another or explicitly fighting as a traditional team shone that a bit. In the end, Jon would have lost if not for Jimmy and Jirachi, and they would have lost if not for Jon and Rayquaza. And if either side had lost, everyone would have lost. It was a lot of fun to write.