Quote Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire View Post
Great poems! I love the reference to the extra page you drew for your comic. xD Thursday sounds like you were playing Darksiders II. xD I also liked the Livestock one...it's sad but true. :c Keep Moving gets me curious. I honestly wonder what it's about as well. O: I'm not good at interpreting poetry but I still like to read it. XD

Nice work. c:
Thank you! :D And yep, Darksiders II ;D Livestock one, sad but true? D': (though honestly the inspiration for it is an inside joke where my friend kept calling me those names because I was using the "mobs in suits" skins in Minecraft X3).

Quote Originally Posted by Speed-X View Post
I enjoy the different styles you've got here. And you have fantastic word choice!

Maybe even try a style that relies on rhyme. That takes a lot of critical thinking too! Of course, you did say that you don't write poetry outside of your class, but nonetheless my suggestions still stand.

I'm not the best at interpreting poetry, either, but I can tell that a lot of these poems are incredibly symbolic and...aren't straightforward. But there's nothing wrong with that. Great imagery!

It'd be neat to see you try some more other styles...ones that are unconventional and very stylistic. Of course a lot of those rely on literal illustration, so if anything youd need to draw them out or use some kind of typography program.
Thank you!
I've tried rhyme a few times but it usually comes out as forced. Though one I wrote for this week has rhyme, I'll post that later today C:
Concrete poems? That's actually the assignment for next week C: