I'm taking a Poetry class this semester...

[Ganyu]

I really love Dawn. The imagery was beautiful and the metaphor of the horses to associate the different skies was very creative. :) The rainbow version was an elegant touch too - every line had its own colour. I'm not quite familiar with column poetry but I was fond of Black // White, perhaps due to the controlling metaphor of chess. XD I liked how you juxtaposed each idea in each line, and how they were not obviously associated to their respective colours.

[PTGigi]

I really love Dawn. The imagery was beautiful and the metaphor of the horses to associate the different skies was very creative. :) The rainbow version was an elegant touch too - every line had its own colour. I'm not quite familiar with column poetry but I was fond of Black // White, perhaps due to the controlling metaphor of chess. XD I liked how you juxtaposed each idea in each line, and how they were not obviously associated to their respective colours.

Thank you very much! :D