Quote Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire View Post
Haha yay! I got it right! Wow, really? O: I interpreted the livestock one as something along the lines of "we are nothing but livestock to people" rather than individual animals. As in, looked at as products. xD It sounded like it had that sort of tone anyway. Oh well. x3
I guess that's a case of me having knowledge on the assignment. It's neat the different interpretations you'd get, because classmates who commented on it had a different interpretation knowing the assignment as well. O: (basically the assignment was an "Insult poem" which is a type of poem, not to purposely insult but more to use words and make witty phrases (the example given to us was actually "Yo momma" jokes XD). Hey, but I love seeing people's interpretations of things so if that's what you got from it, that's cool too C:

Quote Originally Posted by PerseusRad View Post
I've gotta say, even though I'm not much of a petty guy, I've actually enjoyed a fair amount of these.
Thank you!



More poems! /o/

Keep Running
Fear demonic beast unbound,
Now released from binding chain.
Keep running, don’t turn around.

Chained talon of chimera hound,
No longer forced to remain.
Fear demonic beast unbound.

Once thought cut to ground.
Tortured soul full of pain.
Keep running, don’t turn around.

Past hurt more than present wound,
Memories vivid as bitter stain.
Fear demonic beast unbound.

Bodies falling all around,
Terraformed into lifeless domain.
Keep running, don’t turn around.

Crimson eyes track down
Those deeded best slain.
Fear demonic beast unbound.
Keep running, don’t turn around.


I Need to Play
I need to play…
…beyond farthest land,
to open her box and find hope
after monsters have been slain.
…above sullied ground,
free to breathe polluted air,
dreaming of the untainted past.
…across scattered realms,
when neither Angel nor Demon is right,
and family is gone but all that is left.
…among the glittering stars,
where all is nearly lost,
but hollowed soldier will see it through.