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I came in like a wrecking ball...
Review/Judgement time
Judging the Judge. Seems strange. Maybe even... poetic?
Sorry, I had to.
Okay, so I liked your story. It was unique and was a nice change of pace, to GCEAs usual dark plots. Good to see someone has enough time for love between saving the world and not getting recognized for it! The plot was definitely unique and honestly, I liked it. Usually I am not a fan of romance crap, unless it is between explosions in an action movie, but this was good. My only negative feedback is purely spelling and grammar, though it was mostly readable (Though spelling Feebas as Feebus made me want to scream on the inside), and the strucutre. I find that it was slightly hard to read in that there were a lot of paragraphs bunched together. But that isn't related to the story, so I present you with...
★★★★☆!
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