Quote Originally Posted by Chakramaster View Post
I think I'm going to try getting a post in later tonight. Just looked back over what all happened and found a good spot to take it. Also depends on if Eri changes his too much between now and then. Both our character seem to be in similar places. So I could possibly make one to join in with him for a short while at least.

I'll probably try to change up the writing style to see how it turns out this time. Maybe get some feedback on it later? Every little bit of feedback will help me improve =)
Sure, if you want me to read a certain post in particular and critique it, I could do that, but really, you're doing a great job and I don't really have all that much to point out. No worries, dude, you're an awesome RPer. :D