Quote Originally Posted by Noblejanobii View Post
I think the main thing that messed me up was that the character that died had just started to work over another character and it looked like a romance was going to bloom. and the thing was this other character that was starting to like the guy that died had been hung up on the main character so it was helping him move on BUT THEN HIS CRUSH DIED SO.
Forgive me, but I'm quoting MTMTE here. I'm sorry, it's just full of great quotes and examples for writing. xD

“If you want to break someone — mentally, physically, emotionally — wait until they’re happy. Let them live and love and thrive. Once they recognize the value of a life well lived… THAT’S when you move in for the kill. Because you can’t take anything from someone who has nothing to lose.”
- Tarn