What would you think of this kind of story?

[Noblejanobii]

Cool, thanks for reading through that huge block of text! I've been wanting to write a refined, won't-get-sued-by-Nintendo version of Trial of Juno for a while that keeps and focuses on the good parts and drops the junk people didn't like about the original fan fiction. Finally, at least, I have a good idea of what I want to work with now.

Yeah, I'm still deciding on the perspective, but I'm happy to have a solid gameplan. I think I might follow the suggestion of doing one page in first person and another page in third person, both covering the same event. I'll see how that works and will go from there.

Hey man fan fiction is great writing practice. One of my original stories nowadays started as a Blue Exorcist fanfiction. I do plan to give this a more formal review and critique later on, but I don't have the time to type it out now.

Yeah that's good. I usually write in third person because it's easier for me to describe events going on around but I used to be a huge first person writer so it just depends on what flows.

[Neo Emolga]

Hey man fan fiction is great writing practice. One of my original stories nowadays started as a Blue Exorcist fanfiction. I do plan to give this a more formal review and critique later on, but I don't have the time to type it out now.

Yeah that's good. I usually write in third person because it's easier for me to describe events going on around but I used to be a huge first person writer so it just depends on what flows.

That's definitely true. I can honestly say fan fiction helps considering you already have a pre-built environment to work with and enhance upon without having to do the groundwork to come up with the setting universe. It does allow you to focus more on plot and characterization.

Anyway, thanks for the great feedback. I haven't quite started this yet but I'll likely get it rolling soon enough.