PMD: Bridge of Invention

[Neo Emolga]

Yeah, but kiddo, they're packing HEAT. But something tells me Squirtle boy isn't going to listen and get himself and others screwed for it...

Another great page! Was totally expecting to see how Rachel and Charlie were doing on their journey, but this does give us the story about what's happening back in Cheri Town.

[Noblejanobii]

Why would you not want protection?

[Scytherwolf]

Yeah, but kiddo, they're packing HEAT. But something tells me Squirtle boy isn't going to listen and get himself and others screwed for it...

Another great page! Was totally expecting to see how Rachel and Charlie were doing on their journey, but this does give us the story about what's happening back in Cheri Town.

You will see. We'll get back to Rachel and Charlie really quick, this is just a quick little moment.

Why would you not want protection?

What he's saying will make a lot more sense when the next page comes.

[Nekomata]

I'm with Noble here. Protection is always a good thing. Unless he's the type that's "I don't want others to sacrifice themselves for me!" That'd make sense, but heck, someone better spar with him so he can at least defend himself.

[Scytherwolf]

I'm with Noble here. Protection is always a good thing. Unless he's the type that's "I don't want others to sacrifice themselves for me!" That'd make sense, but heck, someone better spar with him so he can at least defend himself.

You'll see what he means in the next page!

[Notnat Tlikehis]

He's probably going to say something along the lines of "I don't want protection, I want answers!" Then he'll list a bunch of questions without giving anyone any time to actually answer inbetween.

[Scytherwolf]

He's probably going to say something along the lines of "I don't want protection, I want answers!" Then he'll list a bunch of questions without giving anyone any time to actually answer inbetween.

That would make a ton of sense and definitely would be something he'd say. What he says is a little different though.

Anyway, here is the next page:

[Neo Emolga]

Emissaries!

Okay, the Squirtle kid has a point, I can see where he's coming from. Sure, that can be a long-term goal, but for now it's best to have others keeping your head intact!

And Rachel and Charlie start their trip. They seem so sad, but I have a feeling they'll have better luck elsewhere than they did here.

Great page, though! I applaud your commitment to get a new page up every Friday! And every one of them has been really good, too! :D

[Scytherwolf]

Emissaries!

Okay, the Squirtle kid has a point, I can see where he's coming from. Sure, that can be a long-term goal, but for now it's best to have others keeping your head intact!

And Rachel and Charlie start their trip. They seem so sad, but I have a feeling they'll have better luck elsewhere than they did here.

Great page, though! I applaud your commitment to get a new page up every Friday! And every one of them has been really good, too! :D

Ahhhh I thought I had replied to this sorry for being late!

Yep, he's basically just overwhelmed with everything, but like you said, sticking with them is his best bet.

You shall see!

Thank you! I really hope to keep going every week for quite some time!

Here is the next page:

[Neo Emolga]

Reow. Sure this is Shuca Town, Charlie? It seems a little more like you landed in... Boston. I'm kidding, I'm kidding!

Great page, but wow, the Pokémon in this world really need to brush up on their common courtesy. I'd love to see Rachel hit her breaking point, snap into RAGE MODE, tie their tails together into a super jumbo pretzel from hell knot, and send them rolling down Mt Rocky Rocks head-first to the lovely tune of the loudest and angriest Cannibal Corpse song known to man.

As always, thanks for another great Friday addition!