PMD: Explorers of life

[arnisd]

Yes, they seem like it anyway! xD Yeah that's completely true. I think exposition can be important, but yeah, you've done it pretty well so far. It's hard to squeeze it in without feeling like you're shoving it down people's throats. I know the feels, haha.

Exactly! So it's interesting to see them at a more realistic scale. xD Haha that's okay.

That sounds like a great way to plan. :) Yeah for sure. I mean, endings you can flesh out along the way without too much issue usually. Sometimes it takes a different route to how you expect, too! My stories used to do that all the time haha. Ooh I prefer not to be spoiled but if you ever need help with anything, feel free to shoot a PM my way! :D

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Good plan, Ral! But hahaha Grey...you have a lot of work to do with your attacks. xD I love the way you portray his failure to be a pokemon, by the way. It would totally happen that way! Not being used to your new body and failing to produce the right moves. xD Love it. Hope it works out!

Yea Grey isn't a pro at attack moves, it might take him a long time before gets the hang of things. I mean he hasn't mastered flying/ levitating yet either. Buuut things will work out, since they're the heros afterall

[Suicune's Fire]

Yea Grey isn't a pro at attack moves, it might take him a long time before gets the hang of things. I mean he hasn't mastered flying/ levitating yet either. Buuut things will work out, since they're the heros afterall

I really like that detail though. :D It's kind of refreshing to see that everything isn't easy at the get-go, which a lot of human-turned-pokemon stories don't really focus on. Nice job. ^-^