[WAR] Creative Writing

[Tenacity]

I didn't really have time to finish it to a point where I would be satisfied, so the ending's a little rushed. I apologise if that shows in my work.

WAR Team: Team Trainer
Title: The Nature of Things
Form: Short Story
Link: The Nature of Things

[Grassy_Aggron]

My entry will be up in a jiffy. You said we had until the 14th, and it's still the 13th for me so |D

WAR Team: Team Awesome
Title: Broken Crust
Form: Short Story
Link: Broken Crust. Click. You know you want to.

[Dash]

ENTRIES HAVE BEEN JUDGED

I would like to thank all the people who have joined this week. I had some excellent entries, and the results have been posted on the front page with the scores. The winners for this week are:

Grassy_Aggron of Team Awesome for First Place

and

Suicune's Fire for Second Place


The new theme shall be up as of some time tomorrow. If you want to suggest a theme, please feel welcome to. However, I won't promise that I'll do some of my own editing ;D

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Yay congrats guys! :D I just finished reading Grassy's story and it was definitely really good. And I am super curious about what Pokemon it was meant to be!

Would you mind posting the grading for the stories @Lightning Dash? (Or PM me mine if you prefer?) I'm interested to see how I can improve for next week. :D

[Dash]

@Pokemon Trainer Sarah

Yeah, sorry about that ._." I actually have a reason for this. Spoilers as of recently don't work for me and double or triple, breaking apart my posts, so I tried to make it less cramped and not put your personal scores. I'll put them here, since anyone can go and look at Grassy's and Flare's:

Sarah
Creativity: 5
Flow: 5
Appeal: 3
Interaction: 5
Grammar: 4

@Neo Emolga
Creativity: 4
Flow: 5
Appeal: 3
Interaction: 4
Grammar: 5

@Tenacity
Creativity: 4
Flow: 4
Appeal: 3
Interaction: 3
Grammar: 3

[Suicune's Fire]

May I ask what grammar I failed with? Was it all the typos I made that people corrected? xD That's fair enough. I can never catch my own typos. :c ANYWAY, CONGRATULATIONS, GRASSY! Damn my typos though! XD

Can't wait for next/this week's. c:


~SF.

[Neo Emolga]

Yeah, I'll admit I kind of did mine in a rush. But thanks for taking it into consideration anyway.

[Grassy_Aggron]

Thanks guys. I think all of your entries are wonderful - I still have to read Tenacity and Neo's, but I'm sure I won't be disappointed - and I'm still surprised I won, considering I'm rather annoyed at how suddenly my story stops. Darn that Sudden Stop Syndrome, darn it all and back!

I can't wait for the new theme. If it's more flexible this time, we'll all be able to really show off what we can do~

[Voltaire Magneton]

I'll try to join sometime. When I find the theme good.

Also, I'll suggest that the next theme must have music as an inspiration. Something like that.

Also, congrats to the winner!

[Dash]

Sorry that I'm a bit late guys, and this'll be edited in. This is based off a song I heard recently and got addicted to the three part song series, and so it's what I'm going for. It's Japanese music so it might not make sense, but the theme is based off an emotion/feeling. So thanks to recommendations by you and Flare, the theme for this week is:

Pride
Pride, an emotion that can mean many things. Take whatever you want from it, but your story must include the sense of pride, whether it be negative or positive.

An example (and the song) that explains when you abuse your own pride:





NOTE: You can ask for a subject change, and I'll change it if I get enough to ask. Enough would be 3 people. I don't care about changing it if you want me to.