Well like I previously mentioned I'm planning to rewrite it in a more chapter friendly bite sized format so if you don't want to read it just yet I'm working on that right now.

Aww thanks! I enjoyed this much more than I did WAR. I remember once in WAR I asked a judge if I could enter a drawing because I had a great idea for the theme but since at the time my scanner was a BW scanner it would have to not be in the color. The judge said sure then when it came time to judge mine they said I lost points because it wasn't in color. I was so mad.