Through the Eyes of a Flareon [PG] (Chapter 31 FINALLY up)

[Dragon Master Mike]

I haven't been posting comments lately so I decided to post before I forgot the comments I had in mind. Wow, You really enjoy making us question what is going on XD. Azure at the colony, the random attack (that i suspect has something to do with team rocket), and of course what i'm still wondering: What ever happened to the others who got off the ship? I'm sure the first two, and I would think the third at least partially will all be answered. Still very much enjoying. Also, really? Only teenagers? I imagined them in their early twenties. Although teenagers makes more sense with how Dusty's maturity level can be. Just curious, How do you pick character names? The names in the story (Zhol, Izante, ETC) are really interesting (In a good way). Also, there Is one more time that you did the [I][I] thing. Paragraph 19 of chapter 10 (It may have been chapter 11 but I am pretty sure it was chapter 10). Oh, and right now, I think the last chapter I read was chapter 19.

EDIT: more comments.

I read to chapter 22 last night, and I have one thing to say. Dusty... What are you doing...? She clearly isn't trying to make any friends XD. And seriously, she tells bibi not wynore about Luck? Its times like these I really wish I could talk to the characters XD. Still though, great chapters.