Quote Originally Posted by Cleobel View Post
« Oh yes, I forgot one thing : I lost the Game ! »
Oh..?

OH YOU SON OF A-..!

It was an interesting piece. I mean, heck yeah type advantages. Heck yeah Shiny Froslass. There were so many things going on in this story. But I dug it because it was something.. fun? I dunno. But, If I were to say anything, maybe make the speeches their own entities. Their own individual lines. Speech from alternating characters usually indicates a new line break, anyways. Yay, grammar!

mutherfrickinlostthegamecauseofthisperson..