PXFIRE Comics

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

WEEK TWO - FOUR:
Comic artwork (/10):
Amount of effort and skill put into the artwork itself. Is there nice linework, colouring and shading? Are there backgrounds? Are features in proportion? etc.

Technical skills (/10):
Are the panels and text boxes of a reasonable size? Is the flow of the comic easy to see and not confusing? Do the fonts and colors used work well together?

Fits the Theme (/10):
Does the comic fit all the requirements and the theme of this challenge? Was the character designed in week 1 included in the comic?

Story (/10):
How engaging was the story? Is there enough detail to get your character's personality across? Does the text have any spelling errors?

Overall feel (/10):
Was the comic interesting overall? Did I leave wanting more? Were the characters engaging?



Scytherwolf 50
Comic artwork (/10): 10
Technical skills (/10): 10
Fits the Theme (/10): 10
Story (/10): 10
Overall feel (/10): 10
This is too cute!!! I love the artwork and expressions! You're so good at them! The backgrounds are simple but fitting and the last panel is hilarious! What a cute snapshot that shows off Ruby's personality and skills! You did an awesome work keeping the story contained to one image and still making it funny and interesting. Awesome work!



Noblejanobii 48
Comic artwork (/10): 8
Technical skills (/10): 10
Fits the Theme (/10): 10
Story (/10): 10
Overall feel (/10): 10
Aww this is really sweet. Wow is that really how Lucky got his nickname?!?! XD I thought he was gonna tell a heroic story! What a cute moment between these brothers. :) I like all the effort you put into the backgrounds!



Velocity 48
Comic artwork (/10): 8
Technical skills (/10): 10
Fits the Theme (/10): 10
Story (/10): 10
Overall feel (/10): 10
I love this! Alana is such a cool character! I wanted to give you full marks but I couldn't as there's no background. But it's really lovely. I love your colour choices and style. It seems like the beginning of an awesome friendship and I want more!!!



arnisd 40
Comic artwork (/10): 6
Technical skills (/10): 8
Fits the Theme (/10): 10
Story (/10): 9
Overall feel (/10): 7
Thanks for submitting something even if you didn't get to finish it. I enjoyed seeing your process through your sketches. :) I love all the aspect of the dragon sketches, espeically the flight one! you showed off Dzeta's skills nicely! And the start where Dzeta wasn't allowed in the female bath was pretty funny. xD Hope you'll finish it some day :)


Final scores:

Scytherwolf 27
Noblejanobii 26
Velocity 26
arnisd 21