Perfect Strangers (Language, Violence and Big-Kid Stuff)

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Been meaning to read this for ages, about half way through now. I agree with KFT, you're really good with the little details that make everything seem realistic. Probably doesn't hurt that I know all the places you're talking about either haha.

The memory forgetting thing is interesting. I feel like it'd be kind of hard figuring out where to draw the line about what Emily remembers and has forgotten. Like she remembers you have to pay to use a bus but not that you need a card. It's kind of interesting to think about what a person would remember. I dunno what the deal is when this sort of thing happens in real life but I think you did a great job of making it believable. I do find it kind of hard to believe that her mum would let her keep living alone while she remembers nothing though haha.

There were quite a few lines I liked a lot but it's too hard to quote on phone so I'll save them for my next comment. Seriously good job on this though! You have a real talent. :)

[[Desolate Divine]]

Been meaning to read this for ages, about half way through now. I agree with KFT, you're really good with the little details that make everything seem realistic. Probably doesn't hurt that I know all the places you're talking about either haha.

The memory forgetting thing is interesting. I feel like it'd be kind of hard figuring out where to draw the line about what Emily remembers and has forgotten. Like she remembers you have to pay to use a bus but not that you need a card. It's kind of interesting to think about what a person would remember. I dunno what the deal is when this sort of thing happens in real life but I think you did a great job of making it believable. I do find it kind of hard to believe that her mum would let her keep living alone while she remembers nothing though haha.

There were quite a few lines I liked a lot but it's too hard to quote on phone so I'll save them for my next comment. Seriously good job on this though! You have a real talent. :)

Haha I feel like I draw the line with what she remembers based on what I kind of just knew and what I had to learn. The bus for example, I don't recall a time where I particularly learnt that you need to get a ticket for the bus, whilst I remember learning how the ticketing system works.

Yeah, that's a good point. My justification is that she is extremely independent and eager to prove that she isn't going to let this accident stop her haha

All good. Now I am curious as to what lines they are haha

I also thought you'd enjoy seeing all these places you know hahahahaha